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Hi Katzendragonz Author Icon!

What a nice, sweet little story! I was searching for something to review from your portfolio for the game of thrones war when I saw this story and wanted to read it. The title of your story was unique and it made me remember the Barbie series and the "Twelve Dancing Princess." I remember how I used to love the concept of dancing, especially ballet and wrote a story or two featuring it myself. Therefore, I had to see what kind of a poem had you written on the dancing slippers.

The starting was cute, it made me think of Alice in Wonderland because of the rabbit. I liked this children's story where caring is sharing moral is prominent. The rabbit seems to have a very nice personality and cares deeply for the girl. I wonder how the two of them met and became such close friends that when the girl is sad, not smiling, the bunny wants her to smile and is doing so much for her. It also reflects that the girl may be the princess or a prominent person in that kingdom, as well as kind and loved by all. I laughed when I read the shoes complaining that the rabbit was squishing them.

The image at the end of your story added a nice impact. It made the reader realise that the most important thing a child posses is a smile and it should be protected at all costs. *Heart*

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