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I was looking through your poetry written in 2014 that had received an awardicon and this one caught my attention. The title of the poem was very intriguing and it raised a lot of questions in the reader's mind as to what the poem may be about. The short description of your poem is perfect and answers all the questions of the reader, giving an idea to the reader as to what to expect in the poem.

The flow of your poem was strong and the opening stanza was excellent. It immediately caught the attention of the reader as she read and found herself imagining walking on an empty street that has fog all around and there is not a single living thing and the road stretches as far as the horizon. Reading your first stanza made me feel lost, stranded and alone. The vocabulary you used was extremely effective and you made the reader think for a moment that perhaps the nobody in the poem is the reader herself. This is why my favourite stanza is the first one. Absolutely brilliant!

The use of snow in your poem for showing isolation was a good idea, at least I felt so. The reason is because although I love winter, I also attach winter to sadness, loneliness. It seems to me like a perfect setting for a tragic event or a story and when you mentioned the snow here, it automatically made me feel down and added a deeper impact on the reader. The ending stanza - I liked it how you mentioned the face be pink due to the cold but instead it is the greyscale and nothing is coloured. I have no suggestion for your poem *Heart*.


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