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I chose this poem because of two reasons, the first being I am reviewing the awarded poems from your portfolio and secondly, I love reading nature poems. The title of your poem quite appealed to me and I could already imagine the sky with the beautiful maple colours even before I had begun reading your poem. The reader wanted to know what more pictures you will be painting with words and hence here I am.

In the seasons, my favourite is winter but you made me rethink if it should have been autumn. (That's how I perceived the season from your poem.) You painted such a beautiful image in front of the reader. Although I have read many autumn poems or poems about the leaves falling, the season changing but they weren't similar to yours in any way at all! You have a specialty in getting the reader completely absorbed in your poem through the first stanza. All the poems I have read so far, you write such beautiful opening stanza that the reader can't help but feel amazed and uplifted. Same is the case here, the first and opening stanza was my favourite. I could have never used the concept of thief and accomplice in this way and it surprised me. I absolutely loved how you gave the leaves and the tree emotions, feelings and showed them just as living objects to the reader. When I was reading it, it felt just like two close children playing with each other running around, in circles, laughing, playfully. It brought a smile to my face. So far, this is my favourite poem from your portfolio! *Heart*

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