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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi Cinn Author Icon! A very *Balloonr* Happy WDC Anniversary *Balloony* from House Martell at "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.!

The reason why I chose to read and review this story from your portfolio is the title of your story. "I'm fine" are words that all of us use a hundred or thousand times a day and it's a lie when we do. We tend to keep our emotions and feelings to ourselves because we know that nobody actually cares. Therefore, I wanted to know if the story was based on this concept or something different.

I enjoyed the different concept being shown in the story. The setting of your story was good, it was unique and believable. I liked Abby's hobby of taking pictures of things underwater whereas at the same time, she is afraid of water. These were two opposite things but it amused the reader and the reader wanted to know what would happen to Abby when she wants to take pictures under water and is afraid. I don't think I'd be able to do something like that and the ending has me completely decided that I shall never do something like this even if I thought it was okay! *Facepalm* The beginning of your story is good, it hooks the reader to the story and keeps her engaged till the end. Your story had my attention to such an extent that when I was reading how she went under and under to take pictures of the wreck and was repeating to herself that she was fine, she was fine, I felt my breath hitched and my heart beat faster. It shocked me how I was impacted by your story.

After I had finished reading your story, I felt bad and sympathetic towards Abby,if I were to do something like that, I would never do it alone and if Abby were alive, I'd say she learned her lesson the hard way.

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