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You had this poem listed in your poetry folder that contained poetry written for the year 2014 and I had to read it because of the unusual title. The first thought that came to my mind after I read your poem was that usually it is a task that we delay till tomorrow and then it keeps on delaying until the deadline comes and you spend the entire day working on it, trying to complete it. My mind never considered the possibility that perhaps it might be about trying to leave a bad habit. After reading your poem, I could relate to it in both manners, when I am trying to get something done and get lazy, delay it to tomorrow and to give up a bad habit or to start something. It's funny how easy it is to pick up and start a bad habit, a bad action but it is extremely difficult to let go of it. I have heard about a lot of people who try to give up coffee, caffeine, smoking, drinking but they are so addicted and drawn towards it that they cannot resist the urge to stay determined on their decision and stop it.

You capture the idea of a smoker's effort to stop smoking in a perfect way. Even though the character is having health issues and he is trying to give up smoking, however his efforts are not stronger and in the end he gives in, saying he will give it up tomorrow but it's a lie just to satisfy oneself. My favourite stanza from your poem was the last one.

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