Hi Vivian ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Opinion:

You got me, Viv! When I began to read this poem, I thought, "This is a poem by Viv? Wow, I didn't expect that!" By the end, though, all became clear. Well done!

The imagery in this poem is excellent. Quite graphic, quite unpleasant - for a purpose. Along with the brief intro, it slowly painted a picture in my mind of what the person's job might be. As said, I arrived at the completely wrong conclusion partway through your poem. Which was what you intended.

The emotions you stir up in the reader go hand-in-hand with that. That brief sense of horror, followed by a good giggle. On the whole, it just works.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. But then, I expected that from you. I had no trouble catching on to the rhythm and flow of your poem. It's well-presented. I have no complaints!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, dear Viv. Not very helpful, I know, but I couldn't find any errors, nor did I find anything you could improve upon.

My Rating:

An excellent little poem. I am glad that I found it.

I didn't have any suggestions, and enjoyed it very much. So, I'll give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .