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Most of the time, it's the title of the poem that catches my attention or the short description but at many different times, it's the cover photo that appeals most to me and so far, all the poems I have read in your portfolio, I did so after seeing and being captivated by the cover art, it was beautiful and touching and illustrated the theme of your poem perfectly. Although your poem is short but the vocabulary you used was extremely efficient in conveying the emotions of hopelessness, patience-ending-soon and loneliness.

It made the reader feel sympathetic towards the character talked about in your poem as I imagine her standing at the end of a cliff, looking far in the horizon for a boat or a ship to come and take her away. The way I interpreted your poem was how someone might have messed up in life but because they walked on that path, even though their love ones and others were against it, the person has now failed and is looking for help, for support but there is no one to give it to him. It's too late and time continues to pass but she is still there.

The flow of your poem is good, there was no interruption and I loved the lines

much like the woman's spirits.
spy a sail on the horizon, but
alas, no white speck weaves


I admired your comparison of the ocean's movement with the woman's spirit.

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