Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

The scattered imagery of it was beautiful but it didn't make sense in the traditional sense of the word. But, it did resonate with my third eye, if that makes any sense at all.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

A non-traditional poet would probably find the dissonance in this piece amazing. I would think a specialized audience would appreciate the crafting of this piece.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It spoke to me like someone transcribing their dream state. Sometimes, when I meditate for when I'm falling asleep I enter a twilight and strange and mystical things happen in those times. I don't judge myself or others for the things they experience in this state.


Glows:

I don't know if many others can but I can really relate to the line memories of things that never happened join with stories people have forgotten to tell. It speaks to my experiences with deja vu. Some people I feel I have known forever when I first meet them and some are like blank slates. Not to mention, I have a few reoccurring dreams of places I have never seen before but feel certain they must exist, only to encounter them in real life later. This poem is the perfect example of why I'm not a humanist.


Grows:

I'd use commas, just to let me know when to pause before going.



Miscellaneous Comments:

I loved it.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .