Title of Work: : The True Story of the Three Little Pigs (Short Story, Contest)
Author of Work: : Tension
Date: : July 13

Plot:
The author says the three little pigs were actually girls and tells the story substiuting other things for the straw, sticks and bricks.

Scene/Setting:
Instead of three little pigs, we have three girls who were raised by an abusive mother. When the mother got tired of taking care of them she told them to leave and go find their own way in the world anyway they could. First girl got mixed up in drugs. The drugs were the straw and the drug dealer was the wolf.

The second girl got taken to a motel by a man and was raped by him and his friends. The penises were the sticks and the man who raped her was the wolf. Turns out the man who raped her was her real father.

Third girl, couldn't work because she was only nice years old, so she tried to go home. Her mother was being arrested. She was told her sisters had been murdered. Social Services took her to her father. Author points out that maybe she had a different father than the other too. I relate this type of spin as being like throwing a ball (the prompt) against an uneven wall (the brain), knowing you are going to go off in a direction which is not straight ahead. Hope this makes sense. Write on!

Characters:
Mother
Girl 1
Girl 2
Girl 3
Father
Other men
Social Services

Suggestions:
This story is just plain weird. Was it just sort of the spare of the moment type of thing? You just make it with a surprise ending. I'm not saying I didn't like the story. It is very imaginative, to say the least.


Character Count: 1,448 (tags = 222 Characters)
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