Title of Work: : Assignment 1 for Finding Inspiration Class (Genres: Other)
Author of Work: : Tension
Date: : July 13

Plot:
Two prompts are given and one needed to be chosen that could possibly be written about.

Scene/Setting:
Tension chose the first prompt which has a business on a street. The business is boarded up and a sign says "new Business coming soon". The main question to be answered is what is the business. Tension decides it is a business which allows you to revisit with people who have died. In order to take advantage of the business you cannot tell anyone what happens there and you have to do anything which the owners of the business tell you to do. Apparently the business is open to only a select few who enter by the back door.

Characters:
Writer
Next Door neigbor

Suggestions:
I like your idea. Have you done anything with it? There are many different directions you could go? When your story teller enters who does he visit with? What are the consequences of the visit, what does he have to do? What happens if he tells someone? The community thinks it's an eyesore, so the possibility exists the City government is going to get involved, maybe wanting to take it down, that is until the Mayor visits the place. If you had enough of the important people in town visiting the place, the "owners" of the business could take control of the town.... Ok, I will stop ranting now. I would be interested reading whatever else you have done with the story. Write on!


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