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| Purpose and Audience The purpose of the article is to show us another way of life, the true way, the way it was meant to be before greed, egos and negativity foreshadowed everything around us. Consistency and Cohesiveness The article was consistent throughout. I enjoyed the humorous aspects while you explained your points for each topic. Style You have an engaging style right from the beginning, making this a quick read as the information is absorbed. Mechanics The only thing worth pointing out is the use of the bold near the end of the article. I think you meant for the questions to be in bold, and some of the answers were that way as well, while others were not. Personal Response Awesome article on our energy and it pertains to us on a daily basis. I am into spirituality as well and could follow and grasp the points you made. The examples were good and contained enough information to get them across to your reader. I agree we all connected and made of energy, that we all are connected to the same source energy. There's simple experiments to do that prove this. Holding your hands an inch apart and focusing there as the energy builds. It's nice to see you so in tune with yourself and your pets. Thoughts are a tremendous gift that take no effort away from us at all. If anything they only strengthen our energy. Negativity can be paralyzing when it let it filter in and take over all the positive thoughts. Love is the key to life. So many people overlook this aspect, take on the job of judging everything and pressing that upon those around them. I believe we were made to interact, and love each other. Only then can we experience the wonder of the world around us. Great article. I look forward to reading more of your portfolio and reading your insights into the vastness of our souls. Write on! Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby   
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You responded to this review 07/14/2016 @ 5:10pm EDT