Title of Work: : A Wise Father
Author of Work: :Lady Lotsa Quills-H of Stark
Date: : July 15th

Plot:
Two boys are signing up to play Little League Baseball.

Scene/Setting:
Starts in a class room, where Greg comes in and instructs the boys how to line up, in order to make the sign up process go quicker. The boys are divided by age. Greg has the older boys. One boy, a new one to the area, steps up and gives Greg his paperwork. The boy says he and his brother have played before. Greg asks where the brother is and the next boy steps forward. When he looks at the paperwork he notices the boys were born six months apart. Thinking one of the boys may have made an error he questions them about it. He is told one of them is adopted, but they have no idea which one of them was adopted. It seems the boy's parents never told the boy's which one of them was born into the family and which of them was chosen to join the family.

Characters:
Greg - Head of Little League Baseball
Roger Meyer - boy trying out
Tom Meyer - Roger's brother who is also tying out.

Suggestions:
This was a really nice story. It wrapped right around my heart in a warm hug. I think it is really inspirational to explain how the father not telling the boys which one of them was adopted, would make the boys truly part of the family. It was a nice ending having Greg call his father. I wonder if the boy's would ever search out the knowledge. Personally I do not think so. Write on!

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