Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

What great romantic poem! I love the idea of building a castle for the woman you love. It's a great vision! A beacon of refuge that shines to the sea to bring you home with glee!


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

It's a great fantastical romance poem. I bet a lot of women would love a chance to feel like a queen compared to the sun. It's a great romantic notion!


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It was a story poem where the queen is asked to be a beacon of light and goodness for her husband who I assume is away at sea. It's an awesome story of love and devotion.


Glows:

I love that you make a note of stating there is no lock or key and imploring her to come and go as she pleases. It's easy to think of it as a tower of isolation without that part in there. It's such a romantic tale! For I am coming to goodness, and in your arms I'll be free, is my favorite line.


Grows:

I'd like to know if he is away at sea, what does he do? Why is he away for so long? Is he a pirate? Is he at war? What's his story?


Miscellaneous Comments:

Usually, I like it when poetry is broken up into stanzas but in this case, I like the flow of it without it being broken up. It works for me.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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