Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I love the idea of using an endless night sky as a conduit for a greater connection to someone else. It's a beautiful thought and sentiment. It has a tone of Eastern philsophies, with the idea of reaching nirvana.

Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

I love pieces of art that reflect on the love of the universe and pathways to form stronger connections to each other which strengthens our connection to this expansive and ever changing idea.

Was there a clear purpose to it?

I interepreted this piece to illustrate the notion that romantic love can engage us to higher pursuits.


Glows:

I love that each verse is a linear sequence of actions that allow you to express the idea of love and the univerese inside of you and in each of us. My favorite line is to come back and infuse our souls more and more. It makes me think of romance as being this endless stream of positive ripples out into the universe.



Grows:

I like to see the use of punctuation in poetry. It allows me to take intentional pauses.



Miscellaneous Comments:

I love contemplating on the universe and ways we can make stronger connections to each other.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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