Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I live in a generation of choice so I am completely fascinated by the depiction of the television monitoring that you describe. It must have felt so safe and secure as a child but I wonder, looking back on that experience, does it make you uncomfortable to have that amount of monitoring? I don't know if it's better to shelter the youth from the eventual realities of life or to throw them in without a life vest expecting them to either sink or swim. I suppose the best scenario is easing them into the pool of life slowly with parents acting as lifeguards but you're right, not everyone has that amount of stability. How lucky for those of us that had some semblance of it.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

It's great piece of ponderance. Maybe not the way you intended but when we write, the readers always interpret the meaning for themselves. It may not be how we once viewed writing, but it's definitely how I experience it. I don't like to be told what something means, I like to explore my feelings about it and figure it out for myself. I think that's why poetry earns a bad rap in my generation.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

I got the feeling that family is a source of safety and security to you and the television show you watched made you realize that perhaps not everyone had that same source.




Glows:

It was well written and thought provoking.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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