Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

Uh, yeah! I loved it. A sensual piece that paints a vivid picture of fall foliage, sex and tender and warm embraces. Loved it! Also, love the visual attached, I wonder how it would look in color.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Anyone who loves poetry and erotica would love this piece. It's wonderful and I can see why it was an award winner.

Was there a clear purpose to it?

A sensual tale of romance in the fall. You can feel the chilly breeze and warming romp when you read this piece. I love romance and the fall so it combines two of my favorite elements.


Glows:

It's beautifully written and has an excellent cadence and tempo to it. My favorite parts are the impatient actions that lovers make when they're really getting into the heat of the moment. My shirt gone-flung, I can just see that play out in my mind's eye and love the scene of it! One we've become drenched autumn is beautiful imagery.



Grows:




Miscellaneous Comments:

It makes me think of fire pits, cabins, and running lakes. Not to mention starry nights with full moon lights. Wow, this is why I love poetry. It evokes so much for the imagination!


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .