Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I love personification in nature. When I was younger, I tried to personify everything! I wasn't expecting the ending, short and succinct, you got right to it!


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

Every music lover as some point or another probably has feelings of separation anxiety when it comes to separating themselves from their beloved instruments. For people in my family, it's their guitars. My family loves those things probably more than their wives. It's o.k. though if I had to pick a mistress to contend with, I'd rather lose him to music over another woman.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

A windy day and an unfortunate accident separates a music lover from their flute. I hope they find music in their after life. I would think there is a place for it somewhere in that altered reality.


Glows:

It was a short, brief story that got immediately to the punchline. Light as a feather was the first line that foreshadowed the ending where I had some idea what was happening. It was a great way to transition the idea. I hope they find their music in again in their after life form!



Grows:

I wonder if you could use more conjunctions to combine sentences, especially in the first paragraphs. Just an idea.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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