Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I think the Lord of the Rings Trilogy is the best adaption of a book ever made! I love the poem written in Arwen's perspective, a love that she knows she is losing to a greater purpose. What a great idea!


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?
Absolutely, anything written for the Lord of the Rings universe is a poem worth sharing. I love that trilogy! I think it's important to expose people to this universe because it challenges us to be better people.

Was there a clear purpose to it?

I felt Arwen's pain in this piece. She knows she's going to lose Aragorn and is willing to let him go to save his people. She believes in what he needs to do enough to leave. It's so selfless. I feel that purpose, especially in the last line the day Middle Earth is no longer seen from the shore.

Glows:

The Arwen/Aragorn romance is one of the greats of modern romanticism and my personal fantasy favorite. You did a great job of extending Arwen's feelings and emotions when she realizes she's going to lose Aragorn completely to this quest.



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Miscellaneous Comments:

I loved the translations and your attempts to write in their native language.


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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