Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

it's cute idea to turn such a popular christmas poem around to fit kittens. I'm sure that would be a popular contest piece at Christmas time. I also love the visuals of the kittens jumping from chandeliers. I don't know that you'll fight against kittens. lol. It's a cute piece of animal poetry.

Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

It's a fun Christmas time treat. I would think people who love kittens and Christmas would love this.


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It's a tale of losing a pet only to find it sleeping soundly. It's totally something I would do.


Glows:

There is a lot of action in this piece: noises in the kitchen, climbing on the ornaments, grabbed stockings and flung, etc. I love the antics of the kitten, they make me laugh. I hope she settled down and became a good and ordinary house cat. I'm glad she was found to be sleeping peacefully.



Grows: Tag:

I'd use punctuation just to let me know where the pauses should be. I assumed at the ends of the lines since it followed a good meter.



Miscellaneous Comments:

I bet it is hard to keep elegant things around with mischievous kittens running abound!


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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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