Hi dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a lovely poem, dear author! It highlights the greatness of what we have going here on Writing.Com.

You are absolutely right. The three Rs are like a cycle. We read, and this makes us a better author. We write, sometimes giving inspiration to reviewers. We review, reading other people's work and hopefully help them become a better writer. It's a wonderful process, and extremely rewarding. I certainly know that I have become a better author by being on this site. It has also helped me improve my English.

You express this interaction very well, and in a creative and fun way. It's an enjoyable read.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. I had no trouble picking up on its rhythm and flow. I love your use of punctuation - this adds to the overall clarity of the piece. And I love that you allow the capitalisation at the beginning of each line to depend upon the individual sentences within the poem.

Suggestions:

Quite contrary to the message of the poem, I have no great wisdom to bestow here to help you improve your work. I could spot no errors, nor did I see anything to improve upon. I like this poem as it is.

My Rating:

As you can no doubt tell, I like this poem. It's a fun, inspirational read.

I had no suggestions to make. So, I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit




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