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A review for the House of Greyjoy ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Review of Man-Eater First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest. OVERALL IMPRESSIONS: The story of an accident from the viewpoint of the the responding police officer's viewpoint. He walks us through the steps he has taken in arriving at the site of a motorcycle accident. The body has been torn up and the pieces are lying in different sections of the accident site. PLOT & CHARACTERS: The police officer takes care to preserve the accident scene and starts his official report. All this is a normal process until the author introduced the local black, cream and white tom cat. while the police officer watches the cat picks up a scrap of the mutilated body of the victim. Then the cat comes back for more. SUGGESTIONS/EDITS: The story moves really slowly at the beginning. FINAL THOUGHTS: I guess the entrance of the tom-cat makes the story. dblameck My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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