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Review of Seeing the Other Side of Suffering

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

Thinking that pain and suffering is the meaning of life seems to me to be a depressive concept. I believe the real meaning of life is the overcoming pain and suffering. We look at the victims of cancer who have overcome the deadly disease. Their suffering is not who they are. They are who they have become the other side of their suffering.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The article goes on to look at the legitimacy of that suffering in an astral projection in an assistive technology industry. These people are classified in this article as perverts and troublemakers. I have to admit having to read this section several times to get evan a basic understanding of the throught pattern of the argument.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Explain your ideas in simpler terms.

dblameck


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