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Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

I feel so connected to my past in reading this piece. I don't miss the insecurities that young live makes us feel about ourselves. I don't miss the fear, secret crushes and did you or do you keep slam books? Are those still a thing? The author will get through this on the other side and be wiser and stronger for it. This piece makes me remember my great, young loves.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

You write about your vulnerabilities and they are what makes us human and imperfect. I think many readers can identify with your bravery. Putting words to our fears makes us feel less alone. You will get through this, even if you don't. Of course now looking at the date you wrote this, I wonder what do you think now? Have you had a chance to reflect on this experience and if so what was the outcome?


Was there a clear purpose to it?

Expressing your desire to know if you have a chance with this love or do you walk away and find someone else who gets you? I think all of us women have to face that one time or another in our life.


Glows:

Thank you for being brave and sharing your fears.



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~Tsa~ House of Greyjoy







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