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Title of Work: The Christmas Party (Genre: Comedy/Satire/Romance/Love)
Author of Work: The Ice Wytch
Date: July 20

Plot:
The main character, Cassandra, pretends to be drunk exposing two co-workers of the affair they are having.

Scene/Setting:
The scene is one in which Cassandra states an interesting series of statements implementing two co-workers in an affair they are having. Both deny it of course, though the reader is left wondering if perhaps the joke had revealed something truthful hidden between the two of them. The story ends with both of them leaving angry while the main character, Cassandra, earns her rewards for pulling off the stunt/joke.

Characters:
Cassandra, Larry, Fern, Chuck and David

Review:
I found the short story well written and easily readable. I could not find anything to suggest to improve the story as it is currently written. The story starts off quickly and brings the main character to her point and ends with the main character winning her bet by pulling off the confrontation so nicely.

Character Count: 1242
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