Plot/story elements:

Did I feel attached to the story or poem?

The property seems pretty desolate. I love the idea of abandon construction equipment. The setting of the house draws me and the disbelieving tone of the characters. It seems like they always have the best stories in the horror genre. The way Julie and Peter play on each other's imagination makes me think something creepy is definitely going to happen.


Would I recommend this piece of writing to someone else?

It definitely holds my suspense, especially when they enter the salon and nothing has been touched. I wonder if this is going to be a straight up horror piece or if other genres like science fiction will work themselves in. I also wonder about Julie's character. Is another entity enticing her not so say anything yet or is she making that decision of her own free volition?


Was there a clear purpose to it?

It's a classic horror piece complete with a house on the hill. A young vivacious couple moves into a cheap property and has no idea the scene their moving into. I'm interested to see how this is going develop. The suspense is killing me..hehe.

Glows:

The description of the salon is wonderful and I am intrigued enough to review the other chapters later after GoT is over. It's an interesting story and I wonder how much scarier it gets.



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