Hello, I am reviewing for Game of Thrones. I really enjoyed your story. I found it inventive and thoughtful. The story line throughout flowed although I am a little confused about the whole story.
Let me see if I have this...Angela is the little girl listening to the story her mother is telling her.
Maggie is the Great Grandmother to Angela and Grandmother to her mom. Maggie's grandmother takes in a boarder who becomes friends with Maggie. Maggie always include Jean in everything she does because they were like sisters. Jean saw Maggie through the death of probably her mother, definitely her grandmother and her husband Tommy.
Maggie suffered a stroke and "left" with Jean. It's a story that is realistic.
I cannot see the characters, there isn't much description on them. I did see one mistake at the beginning of 2005 you wrote Maggy instead of Maggie.
The confusion in the story is probably me. Jean doesn't seem to age and no one notices that she doesn't age. Is it because she is an angel? I like the care that Jean takes of Maggie and the peace there is when Maggie passes.
All in all a good story. thank you for sharing. Keep writing.