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Review of Humbled  Open in new Window.
Review by dblameck (David) Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Review of Humbled

First and foremost, thank you for sharing your work . I am not an expert reviewer. I am just another writer, but I know it is the reviews that help us to perfect our craft. My opinions are just that; my opinions. This review was done for the Game of Crowns contest.

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS:

A story about homelessness. Homelessness is a multi-faceted problem. When you read this story you will find the writer articulate and skilled. How can this person be homeless? Yet there are many people who live the life that is described in this article. The cost of housing makes it difficult. Do we choose to maintain our life while we struggle to make ends meet.

PLOT & CHARACTERS:

The crux of this article I found in these sentences that he wrote about a person's blog: "This person gives, yet has trouble accepting, and I can relate to this. Probably many of us can."

I found the revelations of the author of this article to be extremely motivating.


FINAL THOUGHTS:

Keep writing and sharing your work.

dblameck


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