Title of Work: : I Am You (short Story, Science Fiction)
Author of Work: : Beetle
Date: : July 31, 2016

Plot:
Everyone on a space ship dies because of a computer's becomes self aware and realizes mankind i totally flawed.

Scene/Setting:
It is decided by a self-aware computer that the colonists aboard the generation ship, Ark, are a flawed experiment by earth, a last ditched effort, to go out into the galaxy and populate it and save the human race. The computer starts to think of itself as a god among the humans. It is their protector. It is the one who has nurtured them. The computer thinks that because of the biological make up of man, it will never learn and will spread slow destruction where ever it goes. It has decided to end the experiment. It is trying to explain to another race of beings, about why it will accept being turned off. It has done its part in protecting the galaxy from the human race, who will now die out on its own small planet.

Characters:
Self-aware computer
Another race of beings

Suggestions:
This is an interesting story. It is reminiscing of several science fictions stories, such as Space Odyase 2000 and even an older Star Trek episode. You have been able to show the reasons why the self aware computer caused the deaths of the people on the generation ship, the Ark, making it sound plausible.

Character Count: 1,198 (tags = 173 Characters above this point)
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