Hi Dhu-Glas ,

This review is a part of "Game of Thrones"  [13+].

Overall Impression:

This is a sweet poem, dear author. I think that it expresses a wish that is echoed by many writers!

I, too, would love to be a poet like those who could write the most beautiful pieces. Each word perfectly placed to inspire a variety of emotions. Words that make people smile, and laugh, or cry - in a good way. Words that can make a difference to people, help them face the day, or whatever obstacles they have to overcome. I know that there are authors whose words have helped me.

On the technical side of things, this poem reads well. It has a pleasant rhythm and flow. Nice presentation. Your use of punctuation helps guide the reader, and your use of capitalisation perfects the overall clarity and reading experience. Great work!

Suggestions:

I have no suggestions, dear author. I enjoyed your work, and I didn't spot anything I felt you should improve on.

My Rating:

A lovely poem. I was happy to read it.

I had no suggestions, so I will give this item a rating of 5 out of 5.

Thank you for sharing your work, and write on!

Kit



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