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FINAL THOUGHTS




STRUCTURE

This poem has irregular lines and five stanzas. I enjoyed the rap vibe I got from it and the beat. The rhyming meter is all over the place as well, although they are controlled somewhat and are only half-rhymes a lot of them. I like the way the sound is very clicky. I can imagine me singing this and clicking my fingers. There is very little punctuation and this gives the poem a runaway train feel about it.

TONE

The tone is unbelievable. The poet cannot understand what the western world has done wrong to be killed in this way. I like the tone as most people can relate to it and interact with the poem. There is also an underline of hate and forgiveness being pushed out of the window.

STYLE

The form it is written in is half rhyme and full rhyme words at the end of lines. The way it rhymes is very unorthodox too. I like this type of poem.

TITLE

The title matches the poem quite well. 'I don't know why' is what the poem is all about.

IMAGE

The image in my head is people standing around scratching their heads. Who knows why a group of people want to blow up another group of people and say it's for peace.

FINAL THOUGHTS

Great poem and thank you for sharing.



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