Hello!Paul

I read your story "Invalid Item"  It's been pleasure to review your story behalf of The Simply Positive Group.

The Story:  The brave Norman Barrows bet with his coworkers on a Halloween day about the existence of the ghost. The following night, all doubts about the existence of the ghost were finally removed forever. Because he found there some real ghosts there.


Final Thoughts:   The conversation flowed beautifully between the characters.
The story is beautifully told. I enjoyed it reading. It's pleasure to know someone like you.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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