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Hello!Amy

I just read a story from your book about Callah a little bee. Callah learned from his father how to get nectar. But the roses tried to trick him often.

The story is unique with a very good message that children should always take advice from their parents.

The conversation flowed beautifully between the characters.
I liked the way you told the story with clear descriptions and presentations.


These are my thoughts and ideas alone.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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