Hello!MontyB

I read your "Invalid Item"  from the nature genre list.

I am sending you a review of your story. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

WHY I AM REVIEWING THIS ITEM:I liked the topics of the story. And the images you painted here.

FIRST IMPRESSION: Beautifully told and written.

WHAT WORKED: This is a story view from a tropical island.

CHARACTERS: The "hero," a tropical island is a character.


OVERALL IMPRESSION This is a wonderful autobiography of an island.

The most I appreciated is the descriptions and presentations of this story and the way you wrote this.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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