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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello!Mac

I just read this verse poem.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: This is a beautiful poem with a unique story.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: You paints a nice picture. the poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like the way you are telling this story.

*Pencil* Favorite line:
“Prancing raindrops
on my roof,
Whistling wind
against my window,
Twigs
on my front porch,
A wind-blown
neighbor appears
at my door.”

I enjoyed your poem. Please do, keep up the wonderful poems. I look forward to reading more of them.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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