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 Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon"  ! Greetings, Raghav R! This is very well written piece, and you managed to capture and relate what you and your companions were feeling as you watched this peacock 'strut his stuff' for the crowd. The spelling and grammar were flawless (thank you), and other than veering from the main topic only briefly (which didn't really do any damage to this), it was excellent. On a side note, I used to live in the country years ago and there was a cattle farm between my father's house and the main town. It sat right at the corner of 90 degree turn in the road so that people would would practically have to stop their cars to make it, and right there on that farm they had about 20 or 30 peacocks that they kept as 'pets'. It was always a thrill to go around that corner and see a bunch of the male peacocks strutting around with their tales held high! Sorry, I digress. Great job, Raghav! Kee ponw ritin gon, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You might want to get your bioblock (biography) set up so we can know a little something more about you, but that's up to you, of course.
PPS-If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Please Review Page or The Plug Page under Community on the left hand side. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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