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 |  | Rapunzel  [ASR] Not quite what the Prince expected.  |
| (5.0)| Greetings, RainbowFish! This is pretty twisted, but being a fan of the macabre and bizarre, I really enjoyed it! I love when old fairy tales are retold (the way they should have been told in the first place!), and having Rapunzel growing a beard was very creative! Great spelling and telling, and it's obvious you have some writing background. And for only being on WdC for a week and this being one of your fist stories, this is very impressive! One tiny niggle: "You must wrap your hair around (a?) column," I also noticed your footnote about 'volumous'. I might have caught that, but I'm glad you explained it first. It looks good to me! On a side note, I also just noticed that your name is Rayne. I've only known one other girl with that name who I went to high school with, and she was a good friend of mine. Unfortunately, as of last month, she's no longer with us. Anyway, great job! Kee ponw ritin gon, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here! PS-You now have your first fan!
PPS-If you want more exposure for your items you can put them on the Please Review Page or The Plug Page under Community on the left hand side. HAPPY NEW YEAR!
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