I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible.

My overall impression of your work: I like what you have here. The rhyme scheme is great and the format gives it a feel of being near free verse. Free verse of course lacks rhyme scheme so your poem isn't free verse but the fact that you followed no actual format that I'm aware of gave it a feel of being somewhere between free verse and structured. I liked that a lot. The the use of three rhyming lines per stanza made it what I guess one would have to call triplets. Couplets are two rhyming lines and are considered a hard write. Triplets would be even harder.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything as I said. It spoke well, had good flow, and good rhyme scheme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: One little niggle is the word air being matched with here in one of your stanzas. it throws of the rhyme scheme.

Closing remarks Thank you for writing this. I really enjoyed reading it. Congrats on being a 2017 Quill Nominee.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .