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Hello ember_rain, I am reviewing this for "I Write in December-January-February" Open in new Window..

My First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's question. The interaction among the characters moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense.

My Favorite Part: I like the smooth flow of the plot from the beginning to the climax.

My Final Thoughts and/or Suggestions: I suggest placing a quotation mark in front of this phrase, I'm going dancing.

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