Hi Prosperous Snow celebrating ,

I am reviewing your item today as part of I Write.

Your poem captures the sadness of a child's funeral. The teddy bear on the coffin sums up your entire poem in a single sad image. Your closing two lines reinforce the entire poem and also speak of modern times where her story will splashed across the morning tabloids.

You have done well with incorporating the required words, and they blend in flawlessly. The only way someone would know this was a word prompt poem is that you have included the prompt and bolded the words.

Thank you for sharing this item! Please keep on writing!

Andy~hating university


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