Hi paddy1

I am reviewing this piece for "I Write in December-January-February" 

Wow. That's the word that jumps out at me. This is an incredibly poignant piece of writing. There is no doubt in the reader's mind what it is about. Even without the brief description which mentions Alzheimers, it's clear.

It's so difficult to write micro fiction. I've tried it a few times and never really managed it. Here, you have told an entire story in under 140 characters! That's so clever.

My favourite thing about this is the character of the lady. I could picture her. You evoke such emotion. This is largely down to the confusion the lady feels. Her turmoil is well written.

I really like this, Paddy. I hope you do well in the contest. You deserve to win.

Choconut



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .