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Hi alfred booth, wanbli ska ![]() ![]() My name is Ken and I'm pleased to read and comment on your work "Invalid Item" ![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting approach. The ghazal is not an easy form and you've used it well in this lament. It reminds me of the great sage, Pogo ![]() ![]() I think you used this form to create an insightful commentary on our world. I like the way you played with the word "watch" using it in several different ways and meanings. Very creative. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Writing is about communication and this is what I saw in your work and is provided solely for your use. It's offered in a spirit of wanting to give you honest feedback... nothing more. Keep writing! Wishing you all the best for Earth Day 2017, Ken ** Animated Images For Use By Premium+ Only ** ![]() ![]()
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