Hello, Prosperous Snow celebrating

I'm offering you this review in celebration of Earth Day, which is marked on the 22^nd April every year, and on behalf of "The Earth Day Challenge" 

Thank you for being aware of our planet and the environment.

What I liked

I love that you're highlighting a very specific campaign in which anybody reading your poem may become involved. The acrostic style you use is clear to follow and your theme wonderful. Some of your lines are brilliant, such as "Cut down the trees without a reforestation plan" and "Treated climate change as a mass hallucination". You begin and end with very salient questions thus highlighting what Earth Day is all about.

What might need work

The line "Each individual can create an Act of Green" sounds awkward to me. Consider "can commit"

"Each step we take toward pollutions reduction" - either write "pollution's reduction" with a possessive apostrophe or simply write "pollution reduction".

"Now can have an affect the lives the next generation" - awkward line. Consider: "Now can impact the lives of the next generation" or even more confidently, "Now will impact the next generation's lives."

Thank you for sharing!

Best wishes,

Bob






My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .