Hello!Apondia

I read your article "Canada Geese" 

First impression:
This is a good piece of work. The title caught my eye. I like the information’s you have given here about Shorter neck Canada Goose. I learned that the endangered Canada Goose have long gray wings, lower their webbed feet. They found in Pennsylvania campus. They have a wide variety of moods and gestures when they communicate with each other.

We the human being rules the earth. We are polluting the air by the greenhouse gases. Polluting sea by the plastics and wastes. It affects many other species. Each year thousands of species disappear. Many animals are being lost due to our negligence. Sometimes hunters haunted them; We cut the trees and destroying their habitat. Sometimes hunters hunt them ignoring the rules of hunting.

It is high time for all of us to think about the endangered species and do our best to save and protect them.

The article: I want to thank you for your description and presentation. The way you present this kept me reading to the end.

Favorite part: “You will see them in the very, very early spring as soon as the ice is gone into the late fall. They are non migratory and will stay as long as they can find food and they will go south long enough to find food. They won’t starve,” said Neyer.”

Overall impression: I enjoyed it reading. I learned many from this piece. Thank you for sharing. This is a wonderful piece.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. I hope you found them helpful. Not all of us see writing or any one piece in the same light. Please take what helps you from my comments and ignore the rest. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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