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| (5.0)| Hello!Christopher Roy Denton   Initial Impression: I like this nature poem. I am reviewing you for "The Earth day Challenge". You wrote all your thoughts so beautifully in this poem about our earth. It describes a lot of problems that our mother earth faces now. If we don't pay the respect that she deserves, then the next generation will suffer. I like the way you put your feelings into words.  The poem: Each year thousands of species disappear. Many animals are being lost due to our negligence. Hunters haunted them; we are using fertilizers, pesticides, and other chemicals. We cut the trees and destroying their habitat. Sometimes hunters hunt them ignoring the rules of hunting.It is high time for all of us to think about the endangered species and do our best to save and protect them. Theme and Creativity:You have good word choice to create the mood of this poem. The tone is soothing. Your poem flowed beautifully with your crafted words. Like the floating sea waves. Every stanza of this poem has the rhyme scheme of a, x, a, x. It makes rhythm faster, happier, and brighter  Favorite lines: “While global corporations stand and sneer polluted sites are added to their lists. Are Homo sapiens a brief eclipse or will we cause a huge apocalypse?  Suggestions :I didn’t find any mistakes.  Overall Impression: . The poem was amazing and the ending was brilliant. Thank you for sharing These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing. Happy Writing! Mina ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 04/23/2017 @ 2:44am EDT