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Beautiful Fall Open in new Window. [E]
An Interlocking Rubaiyat that was written for the Verdant Poetry Contest
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello!QP

I just read your poem. I am reviewing for “The Earth Day Contest”.

First impression: Beautiful Fall is an appropriate name for this Rubaiyat poem. I like the simplicity of your writing.

The poem: You paint a beautiful picture of the Fall. The beauty of the fall nature gave your heart pleasure. Fall is one of my favorite season. In fall leaves are changing colors, flowers changing colors, the gentle wind begun to blow; new life everywhere.

Favorite Lines:
The smell of Fall in the air.
Walk along without a care
As I step over the stones
And the wind flows through my hair.

Theme and creativity: Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. The tone of this poem is soothing that kept me reading your poem to the end. I like the imaginary “Winds cut through you like a knife As I walk along loosestrife“. The rhyme of the poem (a,a,x,a) makes this poem brighter like the fall.

Suggestion: I think you could use more imaginary to make this poem interesting.*Smile*

Overall: I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing. It’s a wonderful poem. I learned how to write Interlocking Rubaiyat poem.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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