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Hello!Victoria

I just read your poem Pantoum Poem for 'The Poets Place Patio'. I found this piece is really wonderful. I am now reviewing your poem for “The Earth Day Contest”.

*FlowerP* First impression: This is a lovely poem. I like the wording of this poem. I choose this poem because of the subject “hummingbird”. Yes, humming bird is the symbols of all good things.

*FlowerT* The poem: I like the way you are telling your story about hummingbird. In first stanza, you used the word, swift grace of flight ; which describes the characteristics of a humming bird. The poet expressed her feelings using different word choices, like, “stunning sight” , “Happy that you are free”. The sweet little humming bird gave the poets heart pleasure.

*FlowerV* Favorite Lines:
My heart fills with excitement
When I see your fluttering wings
Your elegance is always eminent,
Seeing you, my heart always sings..

*FlowerB* Theme and creativity : Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. The tone of this poem is soothing that kept me reading your poem to the end. The rhyme of the poem (a,b,a,b) makes this poem brighter and faster.

*FlowerT* Suggestion: I didn’t find any mistake.
Overall: I enjoyed reading your poem. Thanks for sharing. It’s a wonderful poem. I learned how to write Pantoum poem.

These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Thank you for allowing me to read and review your writing.Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  


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