Hello, Sweetcheeks!

I'm offering you this review in celebration of Earth Day, which is marked on the 22^nd April every year, and on behalf of "The Earth Day Challenge" 

Thank you for being aware of our planet and the environment.

What I liked

Well, you, obviously. But, aside from you, darling, I also love the awesome flow of your theme here. I love how you begin with conflict, challenging the "authority" of those who dare claim climate change isn't happening. Then you go on to present examples of your proof over a spread of three quatrains before arriving at your concluding stanza, where you issue a challenge to your reader — a classic "call to action".

Almost as awesome as you, gorgeous!

What might need work

that “climate change is just untrue. - if you're going to present it as direct speech, punctuate it as direct speech, ie. that: “Climate change is just untrue.

In the line "not meekly yield our kid’s birthright" I think you meant kids' birthright.

In the line "The earth needs help, not an f-ing tweet" capitalise the Earth and consider making it an effing tweet so that the use of "an" there is clear.

Thank you for sharing!

Love,

B-B-Bobby






My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .