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 Canada Geese Open in new Window. [E]
Article: Shorter neck Canada Goose found locally
by Apondia Author Icon
Review of Canada Geese  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Apondia,
This is a well done, fantastic article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of the article. I love birds. I watch them everyday as they perch on the bird feeder in my yard. I began to read right away to see what you had to say about the Canada Goose. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have done your research. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible to the reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.




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