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 | Sweet Breath of Gaia  [E] Gaia protectors celebrating Earth Day every day.  |
| Hello!Turtlemoon  Initial Impression : This is a wonderful piece of write with a unique concept. I like the proverbs. The title caught my eye. The poem : We the human being rules the sea, air and land. Every day we constructed buildings and industry for our own comfort. Sadly we don't pay the respect that she deserves; we don’t think what will happen to our next generation. We pollute the air and water with toxic gases. I hope a day will come when all of us will start caring about the environment and nature to forget our personal matters. Theme and Creativity:I love this piece because main thought of this piece is about our mother nature. It’s written so beautifully that kept me reading to the end. It describes lot of problems created by us (the human being).  Favorite part: "I am alarmed by the "need for greed" in oil and coal to be the end to all means for energy. I am disturbed by the pipeline leaks that continue to take place that destroy the earth, wildlife, and human lives, all of which can never be replaced."  Suggestions :I didn’t find any mistakes.  Overall Impression: . I enjoyed it reading. These are my thoughts and ideas alone. Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing. Happy Writing! Mina ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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