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Greetings, Marysapphire!
This is nice get-healthy, inspirational piece, and I hope other people read it. It concerns everybody, even those who don't have bad habits.
Unfortunately though, I'm not one of those, and I'm going to use some of this advice. I'm about to turn 52 shortly, and I know my health is what it should be. I've been saying for a while I need to quit smoking, and this piece gives me a little 'oomph' to do that. Thank you!
However, smoking isn't my only bad habit, I can also appreciate your advice about balance; I don't eat right, so that's something I need to work on too.
Overall, nice piece. The spelling and grammar were flawless.
Kee ponw ritin gon, Marysapphire, and welcome to WdC! If you like to write, then you're going to love it here!
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